Tuesday, January 31, 2012

In the News- Sea Turtles...UNITE!

Girl gets shirt from favorite player only to have it stolen. 

Melissa Cook, 14, had front row seat to a game that Novak Djokovic was playing at on Sunday. The world's No 1 (tennis player?) beat Rafaek Nadal after five hours, 53 minutes (Holy...that's a long game!) and while he was changing, Cook managed to get his attention while he was changing clothes. So he walked over to Cook and tossed her a spare shirt, but it was grabbed by a woman two seats away. Yeal Rothschild, a mother of three, has been identified as the woman who grabbed the shirt. And she's not giving it back to Melissa either. She insists it was fair game for any of the first row people.

But for Melissa, its a heartbreak, as Novak is her favorite player. She wanted the shirt to put on her "Novak wall". And from the video provided in the article, it clearly does look like the shirt was intended for her. Read the whole story and watch the video here.



Unnecessary Math Questions

A while ago, third graders in Gwinnett County, Ga., were given homework questions about slavery and beatings. One parent couldn't believe the assignment his 8-year-old son brough home from of Beaver Ridge Elementary school in Norcross.
The question read, "Each tree had 56 oranges. If eight slaves pick them equally, then how much would each slave pick?"
Another math problem read, "If Frederick got two beatings per day, how many beatings did he get in one week?"
Another question asked how many baskets of cotton Frederick filled.
"Something like that shouldn't be imbedded into a kid of the third, fourth, fifth, any grade," parent Terrance Barnett told WSB-TV. "I'm having to explain to my 8-year-old why slavery or slaves or beatings are in a math problem. That hurts."
The spokeswoman for the school explained to the outrage parents that the teachers were trying to put social studies into math problems. She also agrees that the questions are not appropriate. To read the whole story click here.


Sea Turtles, UNITE!
Jan Lempfrid went to the Phi Phi Islands off of western Thailand to a dive site called Malong where a video of sea turtles were giving each other high fives. I thought it was so cute, I just had to share it with you. The cute actions is at 0:13.

Aren't they adorable? I remember back in like, third grade I think, I was OBSESSED with sea turtles. I had a ton of books on them and I loved everything I could get my hands on about them. I was crushed when I learned I couldn't get one for a pet, and even more when my mom wouldn't let me have a just plain turtle.

So I moved onto hamsters (Hamtaro anyone?) I was also OBSESSED with these things for the longest time ever. I still kinda am. I had the little toys with their doll house sets and stuff, movies, stuff animals, coloring books, posters, board games, the two gameboy game I could find (heartbreak and the Olympic one), and books.

And when that didn't work, rabbits.


Sincerely,
Sareh



Monday, January 30, 2012

Writing Prompts- Using Music.

So using music is often used as a way to gain new ideas. So today, we'll take a look at some songs and see what we can come up with.

If you like romance...
Real Life Fairytale by Plumb
I've always liked this song because it seemed so sweet. And the perfect music to write a romance with.

Great for fantasy or whatever...
I have a Story (a) by Epic Score


& This is our Land by Epic Score


If you need some to fight to, or rock out to...
Hero by Skillet

Or
Indestructible by Britt Nicole


If you want something in something other than English...
Leis an Lurgainn by Rankin Family
I think this song is really cool. I'm not a big fan of their other songs, but I like this one. 
Or
Baba Yetu by Christopher Tin
One of the things I really like about this song is that not only is it an awesome song in Swahili, but its on a major video game. My most favorite part about it is that its actually the Lord's Prayer. But even if you're not Christian, listen to it because its one of my favorite songs ever. My choir sang it last year too. 

Extra songs I couldn't help but to share...
Siren's Call by Epic Score

Call for Heroes by Shockwave Sound

Rain Dance by Adiemus

The Nanowrimo Song by All Caps (updated)
I LOVE this song. Plus the new version of the music video is cool. I'm jealous I didn't think of something like this first...

Sincerely,
Sareh

Sunday, January 29, 2012

Some Quick Announcements...

Okay guys, I've been some small changes to the blog.

  1. The Archive page has finally been updated. Yeah, I forgot to update it all month. Epic fail. 
  2. Another Epic Fail: I haven't changed the "What I'm reading now" & "Upcoming book" widgets in forever. I've read three books this month. 
  3. (Okay not really a change, but...) I'm halfway through The Cursing! Last week I finally reached 50k and I got to the second part. Yay! So since I'm on a roll, Night Lies and The Prophecy are being put on the side until I either am done or I've been hit with writer's block for The Cursing. Also, I've come up with a new book idea, its called Wayru. Its historical fiction and has something to do with the Incas. But that's all I'll say for now. I'm not sure where I'll go with it...
  4. I've added a "upcoming books" section which is  a To-Read part on the "Upcoming Posts" section. They're in no order and they're a list of books I'm planning to read. 
  5. I've changed the Schedule again. This time, I'm adding extra Writing Tips on Thursdays instead of Book Reviews because I think we need more writing tips since this is a writer's blog after all. 
  6. I will no longer doing four book reviews a week. I'm focusing more on school, blogging more, and writing more, so I am not able to read as much as I'd like. 
  7. (Again, not really changes, but while I'm talking here) What would you like to see me to a vlog (Video Blog) of? I would make a poll, but I feel I need to hear your opinions instead of what I'd like to do. So what do you think?
So that's really all. I'm not sure how totally important these are, but I thought I'd let you know. Thanks!

Sincerely,
Sareh

Book Review- The Candidates

(From Goodreads) Dancia Lewis is far from popular. And that's not just because of her average grades or her less-than-glamorous wardrobe. In fact, Dancia's mediocrity is a welcome cover for her secret: whenever she sees a person threatening someone she cares about, things just...happen. Cars skid. Structures collapse. Usually someone gets hurt. So Dancia does everything possible to avoid getting close to anyone, belieiving this way she can supress her powers and keep them hidden.
But when recruiters from the prestigious Delcroix Academy show up in her living room to offer her a full scholarship, Dancia's days of living under the radar may be over. Only, Delcroix is a school for diplomats' kids and child geniuses--not B students with uncontrollable telekinetic tendencies. So why are they treating Dancia like she's special? Even the hottest guy on campus seems to be going out of his way to make Dancia feel welcome.
And then there's her mysterious new friend Jack, who can't stay out of trouble. He suspects something dangerous is going on at the Academy and wants Dancia to help him figure out what. But Dancia isn't convinced. She hopes that maybe the recruiters know more about her "gift" than they're letting on. Maybe they can help her understand how to use it...But not even Dancia could have imagined what awaits her behind the gates of Delcroix Academy.
I found this at my library a long time ago and while waiting to be picked up, I sat down and started to read this book. Well I didn't get to finish the book and so the next time I went, I borrowed it. 
After recently reading Legacies, I found this book not very original. I've seen this theme a lot. Orphan somehow gets to go to a mysterious selective academy which turns out to be a school where all the students have some kind of power. It's getting old. 
Anyways, the book was pretty interesting. I didn't like the characters all that much, they annoyed the crap out of me most of the time. Especially Jack which according to other reviews, most people like him the most. And then there's Cam, the hottie and I'm-so-perfect dude. He was okay, but he annoyed me sometimes too. 
To me, Danica wasn't all that great of a heroine. Oh yes, we could relate to her, but after a while she bugged me. One of the things that bugged me most was her relationship with Jack. She basically ignores him because she has this crush on Cam and he thinks that Jack isn't a good person. But then Jack starts to follow her and stuff. And in the end, he gets really scary. 
All of the girls in this story were either really shallow or those annoying chatterbox girls. 
The plot itself was good, it had mystery in it and the story ends with enough loose strings that you may want to read the next book. I'm curious to see what this academy is really like, if there is something dangerous about it, and what happens to Jack. 
But even so, I don't think I'll read the next book. It was a good book, but I'm just not really excited to read the next one. I'm more willing to read A Million Suns by Beth Revis or Truth by Julia Karr. 
Goodreads: The Candidates
Website: Inara Scott
Sincerely,
Sareh

Book Review- Avielle of Rhia

(From Goodreads) Since the blood of her great-great-grandmother, Dolvoka, had sprung up in Princess Avielle-because she looked Dredonian-would Dolvoka's evil magic spring up in her, too? 
With her silver skin and silver hair, fifteen-year-old Princess Avielle of Rhia resembles her Dredonian great-great grandmother who practiced evil magic. Everyone in Rhia expects Avielle to turn evil, too. Shunned by those around her, she feels unloved and unable to love others. In addition, Rhia is on the verge of war with Dredonia, which suffers under the rule of evil wizard-priests: the Brethren of the Black Cloaks. They have placed impossible demands upon Rhia, but the king and queen have refused to acquiesce.
One terrible night, the Brethren attack, killing the royal family and hundreds of others. Only Avielle escapes. She must keep her identity secret to avoid death from the enemy. While hiding among the common people, she learns that she has a magical gift for weaving. But will this gift, rooted in her Dredonian blood, lead Avielle to the same evil that possessed her great-great grandmother? Or will it help her free her people from further attacks?
So I found this in my library one Saturday when I went to go to my writer's group. Only I found out that there wasn't writer's group that day and decided to browse the shelves for books. I got way too many books. 

Anyways, I happened across this book and I loved it! I could barely put it down, even when there was a demonstration about how the CSI solves crimes and stuff. 

I LOVED the characters, they were my favorite part and you could clearly see how Avielle grew and developed at the end of the story. I was so happy to see her finally get rid of her grief and come out of her great-grandmother's shadow. Avie was very realistic, she dealt with her grief and struggled with it. She had flaws and good things about her. You wanted to her to win, and to know where her gift of weaving would take her. In the end she struggled and won. It wasn't one of those I'm-so-awesome-so-this-ending-struggle-won't-be-hard, it was the final struggle that she had to work to overcome. 
There wasn't really any romance in this story although there was clearly the possibility for it. But then, the novel isn't about romance and I feel like I'm happy that the author didn't put romance into it because so many YA novels include it. 
The rest of the characters were awesome too. I was so sad when her family died although I wasn't so sad when her eldest brother died. I just wished we could have seen more of her siblings. They were only mentioned once and then never touched on again. I was sad when the lady (I can't remember her name) she stayed with died, and when all the other bad things happened to her. 
Another thing I loved about this book was how rich the culture was. It was so explored and didn't leave much to desire or many questions unanswered. Another thing that was dealt with very nicely was the topic of race and prejudice. It was very prevalent in the story and the author handled it with grace so that it left me with a good message. 
As for the plot, it was very good. I enjoyed seeing her struggle between good and evil and then eventually over coming her fears and embracing who she really was. And eventually saving her kingdom. I like how Avie learns eventually that its not what's on the outside that counts, but what's on the inside. I also enjoyed seeing Avie learn that she wasn't unlovable and seeing her return that love and kindness. 
I would enjoy seeing a sqeul to this. Unfortantly the author has never written one, although I think there certainly could be one. But the novel is fine on its own as it is. One thing I wish seeing a little more of was learning more about the other countries in the book. We learn a little about Dredonians about not really a lot. And I remember other countries being mentioned too. 
Overall it was a fantastic book and I'm happy to give it five out of five stars. 
On Goodreads: Avielle of Rhia
Website: Dia Calhoun
Sincerely,
Sareh

Saturday, January 28, 2012

Writing a Complex or Hard Novel.

When I first began writing The Cursing, my  dark fantasy-horror novel, I has one main fear.

Would reader find this interesting enough?

It wasn't the plot that bugged me. It was how I was telling the story. Not pov but the way I was telling it.

You see, Tatiana, my protagonist, spends about half the novel locked up in one place with only usually three people to talk to. Sometimes another character appears or more than one. I was terrified that there wouldn't be enough things interesting to pull the novel along, that Tatiana would end up with too many scenes where it was just her thinking. That there wouldn't be enough action or dialogue.

But now, having written almost half the novel and getting to the part where Tatiana will finally be allowed to talk to more people besides her best friend, her aunt, and her aunt's Representative, I'm finally seeing that there is (hopefully) enough action and dialouge.

I'm going to state the obvoius here. In most books, the MC usually goes to more than one place (school, home, friend's houses, the castle, the etc) and usually talks to more than three people thoughout the book. There's probably been at least...six characters other than her aunt, her aunt's Representative, and her best friend that she's been able to talk to. That's not a lot.

And so today, I'm going to hopefully give some good advice about writing difficult books.

What is a "difficult" novel?
To me, personally, a novel that's difficult to write is,

  1. Any novel that requires large amounts of research, interviews, etc to write. 
  2. A novel that doesn't give you large enough room to properly develop characters, plot, setting, etc without some major hard work. 
  3. A novel that's personally stressful to you to write. 
  4. A novel that is very complex with many characters, subplots, etc. 
Of course, you could argue that any novel is difficult to write, but you could also argue that there is some novels that are harder than most. 

Writing a difficult novel with large amounts of research.
One of these days I'll give a more indepth look on researching, but for tonight, we'll take the condensed version. 

Researching for your novel can be hard and we must remember to not just research and not write anything because we may fear that there's always more research todo. For people who research too much, I advise this: remember that eventually you won't be able to find what you're looking for be research, you'll have to create it yourself. 

Anyways, if you're doing lots of research, narrow down what exactly you're looking for. Start with something board, like the 1400s in China or whatever and narrow it down from there. Remember that you don't have to use everything you find and sometimes its nice to take these facts and add our own twists to them. If you're writing fiction that is.

Try looking in libraries, different sites on the internet, videos, and interview people about things if you are looking for things. And remember to look for more than one source. 

A novel that doesn't give you much room.
Like in my novel and other stories, writing a novel that has a limited amount of setting and characters can be hard to write a full-length novel from. In The Cursing, I had to make sure that Tatiana was usually talking to someone. Either her aunt, her best friend, or someone else. But not too many people could just appear. And I couldn't have her just talking to one person. 

To add some action, I couldn't write what her normal life would be like and go from there, I had to start with a life-changing event and make sure that from this stemmed enough events that she would eventually do other things. I'm not sure how to explain that part, but hopefully you understand. I had to make sure there was enough things going on that was different than what she was going prior when the novel started. 

Another hard novel I'm writing involves short-term memory loss. The protag, Anastasia has her memory easered basically every night and when she wakes, she can't remember who she is or who other people are. She can remember concepts and ideas, but not events. I've only seen a book, Forgotten by Cat Pactrick, and the movie Fifty-first dates cover short-term memory loss. Bascially my worry here, will I repeat things too many times? In this kind of novel, the difficult part is figuring out how much you can repeat things and what to change. 

In this point, I think the main key is tackling the hardest point(s) by using your critical thinking skills. Basically, determine the key elements that won't have the most room and focus on those. 

A personally stressful novel.
I've never actually written something that was very stressful to me. So I guess I can't give much advice on this only other than that I'm reading a book where the main character does this. Anyways, work on it if you want to and if you need, take breaks from the novel. Don't over-stress yourself. 

Complex novels.
Personally, I think one of the biggest problems in a really complex novels would be keep track of who is who and making sure your readers will know this too. I read this one article a while back where this novel written in China or maybe it was about China...I can't remember, anyways, it focused on more than 4.5 million people! That's gotta be tough.

So, what do you think is a difficult novel? What's the hardest thing you've ever written and why?

Sincerely,
Sareh

Wednesday, January 25, 2012

Historical Facts- John Tyler

I briefly talked about John Tyler once before I think. Anyways, he was president during 1845, born 221 years ago and died 150 years ago. He still has two living grandchildren. Yep, you read that right, two living grandchildren. 

Harrison Ruffin Tyler
Here's how it works: he was born in 1790. Then he became the 10th president in 1841 after William Henry Harrison died. At 63, Tyler had Lyon Gardiner Tyler in 1853 and Lyon had Lyon Gardiner Tyler jr. in 1924 at 71 years old. Four years later Lyron Senior had Harrison Ruffin Tyler at the age of 75. Both Lyon Gardiner Tyler jr. and Harrison Ruffin Tyler are still alive. 

Lyon Gardiner Tyler Jr. 
John Tyler had two wives, Letita who died in 1842 from a stroke, and Julia Gardiner who was thirty years younger than him. He had eight children by Letita and seven by Julia- more than fifteen in all. His eldest daughter was five years older than her stepmother who married Tyler when she was 23. He had been born when George Washington was president, and his youngest daughter, Mary (born when Tyler was 70), died during Harry Truman's presidency. That's more than 32 presidents and 150 years! 
Julia Gardiner
Another random fact about John Tyler:
Shortly before he died, he join's the Confederates and even elected to their House of Representatives. Because of this, he is the only president who's death is not offically mourned.

Resources
John Tyler's Grandchildren Still Alive
Secret Lives of the US Presidents by Cormac O'Brien

Sincerely,
Sareh

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